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The Seeker of Words

Published / by Jehangir

Yet again, its that time of year.

Wahrat-triggered insomnia crumbles my resistance and today, yet again, I must succumb to this irresistible urge to inflict my translations upon innocent stumblers-upon.

Sadly, it is Faiz Ahmed Faiz who today, yet again, has to suffer this posthumous ignominy – but that is just the way it is.

Aaj Ek Harf Ko – Faiz Ahmed Faiz

aaj ek harf ko phir dhoondta phirta hai khayal

madh bhara harf koi, zeher bhara harf koi
dil-nashin harf koi, qeher bhara harf koi

aaj ek harf ko phir dhoondta phirta hai khayal…

harf-e-ulfat koi dildar-nazar ho jaise
jis se milti hai nazar bosa-e-lab ki surat
itna roshan ke sare-mauja-e-zar ho jaise
sohbat-e-yaar main aghaaz-e-tarab ki surat
harf-e-nafrat koi shamsheer-e-ghazab ho jaise,

aaj ek harf ko phir dhoondta phirta hai khayal…

ta abad shahre-sitam jis se tabah ho jayein
itna tareek ke shamshan ki shab ho jaise
lab pe laoon to mere honth siyah ho jayein
aaj ek harf ko phir dhoondta phirta hai khayal…

Here goes…

today, yet again, my thoughts wander seeking a word

an intoxicating word, a venomous word
a bewitching word, a wrathful word

today, yet again, my thoughts wander seeking a word

a word of desire that brings to mind my beloved's glance
meeting my gaze like a kiss on the lips
as radiant as the crest of a wave of gold
like the first stirrings of ecstasy in a lovers tryst
a word of hate slicing like a fearsome sword

today, yet again, my thoughts wander seeking a word

a word that shall destroy these flourishing cities of oppression
a word as dark as the dusk over a cremation ground
a word that, if uttered, shall turn my lips black

today, yet again, my thoughts wander seeking a word

Strangely enough, it is Faiz Ahmed Faiz, and not Ghalib, whose poems feature most on my blog, even though the latter is my favourite poet.

Shashi Kapoor, who self-confessedly did not know a single word of Urdu, did an amazing job in this version of Aaj Ek Harf Ko featured in Merchant-Ivory's Muhafiz/in Custody.

Enjoy !

Return to The Land of Poems

Published / by Jehangir

Kashmir is famous for the lol* of Zooni, its poetess-queen, and Arnimal.
Rasul Mir and Mahjoor represent the peak of the romantic era.
*‘Lol’ may be considered a Kashmiri form of ‘Lyric’ poetry which is a formal type of poetry which expresses personal emotions or feelings, typically spoken in the first person.

hatyuk rath bu kadha,
naman tas bu malha,
hekya baar temkui,
su naazuk athanh peth

This kashmiri couplet was narrated to me years ago by the late Mohiuddin Shah, one of the most outstanding bureaucrats that Kashmir has produced. There is a bit of history associated with it, which I may relate at a later date. Meanwhile, permit me to attempt a translation:

If I slit my throat
to paint my beloveds' nails
Would she bear the strain
on her delicate hands?

A similar sentiment is echoed in this translation of a Kashmiri poem by Marion Doughty, an English traveller to the valley.

O that my blood were water, thou athirst !
And thou and I in some far desert land,
How would I shed it gladly, if but first
It touched thy lips before it reached the sand.

Urdu poetry is a goldmine of romantic imagery. Ghalib is said to have offered his Diwan in exchange for this couplet by his rival Momin.

tum mere paas hote ho goya
jab koi doosra nahin hota.

Then there is Ibn-e-Insha and his Farhad-meets-Freud ballad, Farz Karo.

farz karo hum ahl-e-wafaa ho
farz karo deewane ho
farz karo yeh dono baatein
jhooti ho afsane hon
farz karo yeh ji ki bipta
ji se jor sunai ho
farz karo abhi aur ho itni
aadhi humne chhupai ho
farz karo tumhe khush karne ke
dhoonde humne bahaane ho
farz karo yeh nain tumhare
sach-much ke maikhaane ho
farz karo yeh rog hai jhoota,
jhooti preet hamari ho
farz karo is preet ke rog mein
saans bhi hum pe bhaari ho
farz karo yeh jog bijog ka
humne dhong rachaaya ho
farz karo bas yahi haqeeqat
baqi sab kuch maaya ho

How about the great revolutionary poet Faiz Ahmed Faiz with Teri Samundar Ankhon Mein.

ye dhoop kinara, sham dhale
milte hain dono waqt jahan,
jo raat na din, jo aaj na kal,
pal bhar ko amar,
pal bhar mein dhuan,
is dhoop kinare, pal do pal,
honton ki lapak,
baahon ki chanak,
ye mel hamara jhoot na sach,
kyon raaz karo, kyun dosh dharo,
kis kaaran jhooti baat karo,
jab teri samundar aankhon mein,
is shaam ka sooraj doobega,
sukh soenge ghar dar wale,
aur raahi apni raah lega

Let me dedicate the last poem to my wife:

The Land of Poems*
For just one glimpse of you,
The rosebud of your street
Has bloomed anew !
No songbird there to greet
Your rose, which blooms alone,
But in that land
Of poems, where have grown
My roses, and I stand
Within the shrine
Of secret meanings, hail !
How every verse of mine
The nightingale
Will sing, and none destroy
The ecstasy we share,
His house of joy
On heights none others dare.

* Persian Diwan of Mahmud Gami
(Translation by Nilla Cram Cook)

Update: Translations are available here.

Faiz vs Ghalib

Published / by Jehangir

Sorry for yet another blogging hiatus. I did write a few posts but did not publish them online. Somehow the relevance of one individual's thoughts seemed to be blown away by the turbulence of the past weeks. Insignificance in an Orwellian nightmare.

These days all thoughts and discussions inevitably veer around to the state of things in the valley. A comment on a previous post and a pointed reference to Faiz Ahmed Faiz for my benefit resulted in today's post. Scrolling down to the end will present my attempts to translate the poems to the best of my ability.

A poetry-spouting friend addressed me thus:

bol, ki lab azaad hain tere
bol, zubaan ab tak teri hai

For my readers benefit:

Bol ~ Faiz Ahmed Faiz

bol, ki lab azaad hain tere
bol, zubaan ab tak teri hai
tera sutwan jism hai tera
bol, ki jaan ab tak teri hai
dekh ki aahan-gar ki dukan mein
tund hain sholay, surkh hai aakhan
khulne lage quflon ke dahaane
phaila har ik zanjeer ka daaman
bol, ki thoda waqt bahut hai
jism-o-zuban ki maut se pehle
bol, ki sach zinda hai ab tak
bol, jo kuchh kehna hai kehde

From the depths of memory, Ibn e Insha seems to mock me further:

Khamosh Raho ~ Ibn e Insha

kuchh kehne ka waqt nahi hai kuchh na kaho khamosh raho
ae logon khamosh raho, haan ae logon khamosh raho

sach achchha hai, par is ki jadon main, zehr ka ek pyala bhi hai
pagal ho, kyun nahaq ko "suqraat" bano, khamosh raho

haq acha par is ke liye koi aur marey to aur achchha hai
tum bhi kya "mansoor" ho jo sooli pai charho, khamosh raho

un ka yeh kehna sooraj hi dharti kai pherey karta hai
sar ankhoon par, sooraj hi ko ghoomne do, khamosh raho

garm ansoo aur thandi aahen, man main kya kya mausam hain
is bagiya ke bhed na kholo, sair karo, khamosh raho

ankhian moond kinare baithoon, man ke rakhoon band khewar
insha ji lo dhaga lo, aur lab si lo, khamosh raho

Fortunately Ghalib, with his genius for having penned a verse for every occasion, springs to my defence:

bana kar fakiron ka hum bhes Ghalib
Tamasha-e-ahle-karam dekhte hain

Faiz and my friend(?) team up again for a parting shot.

Hum Dekhenge ~ Faiz Ahmed Faiz

hum dekhenge
lazim hai ke hum bhi dekhenge
wo din ke jis ka wada hai
jo lauh-e-azl mein likha hai

jab zulm-o-sitam ke koh-e-garan
rooi ki tarah ur jaenge
hum mehkoomon ke paaon tale
ye dharti dhar dhar dharkegi
aur ahl-e-hakam ke sar oopar
jab bijli kar kar karkegi

jab arz-e-Khuda ke kaabe se
sab but uthwae jaenge
hum ahl-e-safa mardood-e-haram
masnad pe bethae jaenge
sab taaj uchale jaenge
sab takht girae jaenge

bas naam rahega Allah ka
jo ghayab bhi hai hazir bhi
jo manzar bhi hai nazir bhi
utthega an-al-haq ka nara
jo mai bhi hoon tum bhi ho
aur raaj karegi khalq-e-khuda
jo mai bhi hoon aur tum bhi ho

Disclaimer: In these translations I have tried to convey the meaning of the poetry inasmuch as I have been able to understand it – sans the usual translation ploys like forced rhyming, embellishment or clever turns of phrase.

Bol ~ Faiz Ahmed Faiz

speak , for your lips are free
speak, for your tongue is still your own
use your vigorous body
speak, for your life is still your own
behold the blacksmiths forge
embers rage, irons glow
locks snap, and every chain is stretched
speak, for an instant is time enough
before the death of speech and body
speak, for truth still breathes
speak up and say what you must

Khamosh Raho ~ Ibn e Insha

It's not the time to speak up, hold your tongue
stay silent o people, yes, hold your tongue

truth is good, but its roots hide a bowl of poison
don't be crazy, are you Socrates? hold your tongue

truth is fine, better still if someone else dies for it
don't climb the gallows, are you Mansoor? hold your tongue

they say the sun revolves round the earth, so be it,
let the sun do what it pleases, hold your tongue

warm tears and cold sighs, what seasons the mind has
don't reveal the garden's secrets, just stroll, and hold your tongue

I sit on the shore, eyes shut, and mind shuttered
Insha, take this needle and thread, sew your lips, hold your tongue

Hum Dekhenge ~ Faiz Ahmed Faiz

we shall see
we too shall see for certain
the promised day
on the tablet of destiny written

when mountains of tyranny
shall blow away like cotton
beneath our oppressed feet
the earth shall shake and rattle
and over the heads of rulers
lightning bolts shall crackle

when the abode of God
shall be cleansed of all false idols
we – the banished faithful
on seats of honour shall repose
all crowns tossed
all thrones toppled

only His name will survive
He who is unseen but omnipresent
the spectacle and the beholder
I am God – the cheer shall rise
who you are, and so am I
the people of God will rule
who you are, and so am I